sábado, 25 de abril de 2009

Extreme challenge



Last sunday i saw a extreme challenge,is a program tv about the life and travels around the world of Jesus Calleja.
Jesus is not a tipical travellers,he does extreme challenges as well as climbing the everest,race the Paris-dakar or crossing the Polo North.He is a adventurer.
Last week he climbed the Peaks of Europe with Zapatero,the president of Spain.
For me the best trip was the crosing Fire land,with a no knowed route,the team was formed for 6 persons and walking 6 days for did the expedition.
The team went to the expedition with one bag,the bag weigth around 60kg,and inside have the food,the tent and wear.
The best moment of the expedition was the crossing the frozen lake,becaouse was very dangerous.
I invited you to see the next program.

1 comentario:

Ana Vázquez dijo...

Hi Borja

Remember that "I" is always written in capital lettters. Remember that we use "an" before a word that starts with a vowel. Don't forget the subject "It's a TV program..."

"trips". Remember that "travel" is an uncountable noun.

"typical traveller" in singular. "He meets extreme challenges such as..." "...race in..." "the North Pole...". "...an adventurer"

"Picos de Europa" it's the name of a Spanish place, so you can write it in Spanish. "Spanish President".

"...when he crossed the Fire Land...through an unknown route..."

"...formed by 6 people and they had to walk for 6 days to complete the expedition".

"The team went on expedition ..." ..."the bag weighed... they had the food, the tent and their clothes."

"...was when they were crossing the frozen lake, because it was very dangerous.

Don't forget the subjects. Remember that in English we always need a subject. Be careful with the verb structures and the verb tenses.