It´s my description of Navacerrada´s winter resort
This resort is located in the nort of the Madrid mountains , from town down 50 minutes away
being the uniquelly winter resort in the Spain capital. In this one there are six grand slopes and two slopes for practicing the cross-country skiing .
the resort also there are five bungallows that the people often use for sleeping and spend the weekend .
this is a beautiful place where the children enjoy of outdoors with many snow and trees .
The Navacerrada winter resort is the ideal place for enjoing a young familly with three children .
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Hi Lurdes, again
"This is my...." "in the north of Madrid's mountains" Remember that we don't use any article with towns, countries.
"It's 50 minutes away from downtown and it's ..." "Cross-country skiing" without article. "In the resort, there are also five..." Don't forget the prepositions and the word order."...that people often use" whthout article, because we talk about people in general. "for sleeping and spending...".
"...where children enjoy.." also without article, because we talk about children in general" " a lot of snow..." "where a young family with three children will enjoy"
It's very good, but remember about the use of articles and the omission of article.
Go on writing and you'll improve a lot.
Regards,
Ana Vázquez.
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